Wednesday, 19 September 2018
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Hi my name is Riccardo and I go to Pompallier Catholic school. I really enjoyed reading your post and how you used steps and not paragraphs also now I know how to deal with cyberbully's.
ReplyDeleteHi Keira my name is leyton i go to pompallier catholic school in kaitaia
ReplyDeletei do the manaia kalani program with Donna Yates. Its good how it show me what to do if i'm getting cyber bullied.Step 5 show it just stops them from talking to me.Next time use punctuation.
Hi Pippa, I'm Scott and I go to Pompallier Catholic School, Kaitaia.
ReplyDeleteI really like this because it is simple and easy to read. This step-by-step set of instructions are not too long, but not too short. The grammar is perfect except for some full stops (periods) at the end of steps 2 through 4.
Maybe you could not stagger the steps or not put them into a ring as I read it clockwise.